I am learning to make a plan before I write my story. My plan and my story matches. I have used the same words. I will use a plan next time I write.
Shamal
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On Saturday I went to the movies and we watched Spiderman 2
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happy
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I felt happe when I soor the move
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On Sunday I went to watch Spiderman 2. I felt happy when I saw the movie. My mum, dad and sister came with me to the movies. The movie was funny even amazing because he climbed up walls.
1 comment:
Well done. You are learning to use the ideas in your plan to write your story.
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