Friday, 23 May 2014

Making a Plan Before I Write


I am learning to make a plan before I write my story. My plan and my story matches. I have used the same words. I will use a plan next time I write.


Shamal
On Saturday I went to the movies and we watched Spiderman 2
Amazing Spider-Man 2 swinging
happy
I felt happe when I soor the move Mustache, Smiley, Happy
On Sunday I went to watch Spiderman 2. I felt happy when I saw the movie. My mum, dad and sister came with me to the movies. The movie was funny even amazing because he climbed up walls. 

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Well done. You are learning to use the ideas in your plan to write your story.