I have written the story of Jack and the Beanstalk. I have used describing words. I have some of the ideas from the Jack and the Beanstalk book. I have tried to use capital letters and fullstops but it was tricky. I will keep on trying.
Once upon a time there lived
Jack and his Grandma. They were very poor. All they did was milk their cow. The
next day they had to sell their cow to get seeds, but he got magic seeds. Then
he showed his grandma them. She threw them out the window! The next morning he
looked out the window. There was a beanstalk. Then he got dressed and jumped
out the window. He climbed up the beanstalk! When he got to the top of the
beanstalk he saw the castle. He saw the giant leave money on the table. Jack
got the money and started to run for it. He climbed down the beanstalk! “Look
what I got”, he said. Again the next day he started to climb the beanstalk. He
heard the giant say to his chicken “Lay me an egg”, plop, out came a golden
egg. Then he told his harp to sing to him. “I’m getting tired”, said the giant.
He went to sleep. Then Jack took the chicken and the harp too. The harp called
out to her master. The giant woke up and climbed down the beanstalk but Jack
cut the beanstalk down. They all lived happily ever after.
1 comment:
A great effort Shamal. I can see that you've been thinking carefully about using describing words in your writing. Well done.
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