Thursday, 25 February 2016
the high apple
I am learning to write about a family picking apples in there ohcich.
I didn't need help from anybody
I found it tricky to wirte more then one good sentece
I am proud of myself because I pceraverd in this peice of work I got.
Next time I can cange the background the to confusing things.
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1 comment:
Great effort with the story Shamal. Next time work on your spelling so it makes sense and can be easily read by your audience.
Miss H
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