Thursday, 25 February 2016

My bubble poem



I am learning to write a poem about bubbles

I found it tricky to write interesting scentenes
 
I am proud of myself I found some interesting

I got help from my teacher

Next time I can and more scentenes and more interesting words.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Shamal, I think you did a great job with this poem you innovated from the original one Mrs K shared with the class. Next time you can work on adding a language feature like alliteration or metaphor. We will learn more about these.

Miss H